Wednesday, February 24, 2016

I’ve copied the “homework” notation from the syllabus at the website: there is no written homework unless you have signed up to present in front to the class. but just because i’ve not assigned written homework doesn’t mean there is no assignment. you must read and think about the assigned reading

HOMEWORK
Patterns for College Writing:
Ch. 2 – Invention, pp. 29-49
Ch. 12 – Classification and Division, pp. 433-444
“Mother Tongue, ” by Amy Tan, pp. 463-469

“The Ways We Lie” by Stephanie Ericsson, pp.  471-478

Outline handout(s) - will talk about principles of outline in class next thursay

Tuesday, February 23, 2016

Powerpoint on Argumentative Essay




PowerPoint On Argumentative Essay

Students: Please download this PowerPoint presentation. It provides a good overview of how to approach the kind of essay you will be working on.

See you on Thursday evening.

Thursday, February 18, 2016

Outline Structure

Complete this form to create your outline for Essay 1…

Tentative title for your essay: ________________________________

I. Introduction
Thesis statement: ______________________________________________________________


Your thesis statement should be a complete sentence that (1) identifies the location of your observation and (2) expresses your point of view on the location. Note: The thesis statement need not be the first sentence of your essay. A good place for the thesis is usually the last sentence of your introductory paragraph.

II. Supporting point 1: _____________________________________________________
Try to express your point in a complete sentence that can serve as a topic sentence for the paragraph.
List specifics and details that you plan to use to develop your point.
A.    _______________________________________________________
B.    _______________________________________________________
C.    _______________________________________________________
D.    _______________________________________________________

III. Supporting point 2: _____________________________________________________

A.    _______________________________________________________
B.    _______________________________________________________
C.    _______________________________________________________
D.    _______________________________________________________

IV. Supporting point 3: _____________________________________________________

A.    _______________________________________________________
B.    _______________________________________________________
C.    _______________________________________________________
D.    _______________________________________________________


(Add more supporting points if necessary.)

Prompt Essay 1: Rhetorical Analysis

Essay 1 – Rhetorical Analysis

“To analyze an argument rhetorically means to examine closely how it is composed and what makes it an effective or ineffective piece of persuasion. A rhetorical analysis identifies the text under scrutiny, summarizes its main ideas, presents some key points about the text’s rhetorical strategies for persuading its audience, and elaborates on these points.”                               -- Ramage, Bean, and Johnson in Writing Arguments

Write a rhetorical analysis essay of 4-5 pages on one of the articles listed below from our textbook Writing Arguments:
·      “Why the Supreme Court Should Rule that Violent Video Games Are Free Speech” by Daniel Greenberg, pp. 454-7
·       “Our Gas Guzzlers, Their Lives” by Nicholas Kristof, pp. 564-565

Your essay should explain the argument presented in the article and evaluate its effectiveness in persuading its audience of its central claim and reasons. Your essay should identify at the outset the audience at which the piece is aimed, its argumentative purpose, and its central argument.  Once you have identified these concerns, evaluate the rhetorical effectiveness of the given text.  A rhetorical analysis examines 1) the writer’s use of the three rhetorical appeals (ethos, pathos, and logos); 2) the arrangement and style of the piece; 3) the context (kairos) of the piece (use what you know and what is in the textbook about the piece only, as research is not a component of this assignment). Review Chapter 8 – Analyzing Arguments Rhetorically for more guidance.

To earn a passing grade, your essay should include:
1.     A title!
  1. An introduction that identifies your article and sets up your argument about the article.
  2. A thesis that evaluates the effectiveness of the article based on the author’s use of rhetorical appeals (ethos, pathos, logos), style, and context.
  3. Effectively organized paragraphs with strong topic sentences and transitions.
  4. Examples from the article (summaries and paraphrases in your own words and sentence structure, as well as some brief, correctly integrated direct quotations).
6.     A conclusion that provides closure to the essay and considers the implications of the argument.
7.     Consistent, correct use of MLA style, including
    1. Proper MLA in-text citations for all paraphrases and direct quotations from the article (see pp. 384-7) and
    2. A Works Cited page in correct MLA format (which does NOT count towards your page minimum) since you will be quoting from your article (see pp. 387-96). Your only source will be your article. No other research is allowed.
8.     Adherence to the conventions of standard written English.

Prewriting:
  1. Choose an article and read it over carefully a few times.
  2. Freewrite on your response to the argument made in the article.  What is the argument? Did the author convince you of the argument? Why or why not?  Be specific.
  3. Freewrite or brainstorm responses to each of the following questions:
a.     How does the author present her- or himself as credible (ethos)?  Does this strategy work? Why or why not?
b.     Does the author use any emotional appeals (pathos)?  Are such appeals effective?  Why or why not?
c.     Does the author use sound reasoning (logos) to present the argument?  Be specific.
d.     Is the style and organization of the text effective? Why or why not?
e.     What does the author do to frame the context (kairos) of the piece?  Could more have been done? How so?
4.     List 4 quotes you might use in your essay, and explain how each one relates to your assessment of the author’s use of ethos, pathos, logos, or kairos.
5.     Write a possible thesis for your essay.

Due Dates:
Outline (10 points):  To receive full credit, you must bring your outline to class and participate in the prewriting/outline workshop.
Rough Draft (10 points): Your rough draft must be typed and double-spaced (Be sure to save it somewhere you can easily find it. If you don’t have your own computer, email it to yourself!).  To receive full credit, you must bring your draft to class and participate in the draft workshop. No credit for late drafts!
Final Draft (100 points): Upload to Turnitin.com before class. Please put your final draft in this order: (1) clean, revised draft of your essay, (2) rough draft with peer comments on it, (3) the peer review sheets your group gave you, and (4) your prewriting. Please do not put your paper in any kind of folder. A corner staple will be fine.
Before you turn in your essay, you will be given 5-10 minutes to write a brief cover letter for your paper (you may prepare your cover letter in advance, if you wish). In your cover letter, you should reflect on your writing process and identify issues you especially want your reader to respond to. You may explain what you were trying to achieve with your essay, what you feel you did well, and/or what you had trouble with.  


Aristotle and arguments

Aristotle’s categories for basic appeals in arguments:

Emotional appeals (also known as pathos) play to the reader’s feelings and values.
            Example: In an argument for health care reform, the writer presents a story about one family suffering under the current system that evokes the reader’s sympathy and sense of fairness. 
Ethical appeals (also known as ethos) seek to establish the credibility of the writer as trustworthy.
            Example: The writer cites a source that the reader trusts; the writer gives the reader a sense that complete facts are being presented and/or all sides of an issue are being treated fairly. 
Logical appeals (also known as logos) use reasoning and logic to make their points.
            Example: The writer makes strong logical connections between steps of her argument, such as clearly explaining how a cause produces a particular effect. The writer supports her claim with convincing factual evidence. 

Thoughts on your thesis

What is a thesis statement?  - controlling/main idea of an essay
An assertion / opinion / point of view / interpretation of facts / claim about a specific topic
“The subject is what an essay is about; the thesis captures a writer’s unique understanding of that subject.” – The Compact Reader, p. 23
o   Topic should be specific enough that it can be covered with reasonable completeness given the length of the paper.
o   Claim should be arguable.  
o   Thesis should not be a question, statement of face, or announcement.

Thesis statement check questions

Does it limit itself to a single, focused topic?
Is the writer’s stance clearly defined? (not overly vague) 
Is the writer’s stance arguable? (not stated as a fact, not stated as a question)
Is the thesis compelling? Is its importance or relevance clear? Does it seem worth arguing for?

Identify the error in each of the thesis statements below. Rewrite two of the sentences so that they meet the requirements of proper thesis statements.
There’s a lot of useful information on the Internet.  
Thousands of American soldiers have died in the war in Iraq. 
Why don’t more people recycle? 
Crime is a real problem in American cities.
I will discuss the effects of increased gas prices on an average American family.  
There are pros and cons to raising income taxes to fund education.

Girl, by Jamaica Kincaid

“Girl”
By Jamaica Kincaid

Wash the white clothes on Monday and put them on the stone heap; wash the color clothes on Tuesday and put them on the clothesline to dry; don't walk bare-head in the hot sun; cook pumpkin fritters in very hot sweet oil; soak your little cloths right after you take them off; when buying cotton to make yourself a nice blouse, be sure that it doesn't have gum on it, because that way it won't hold up well after a wash; soak salt fish overnight before you cook it; is it true that you sing benna in Sunday school?; always eat your food in such a way that it won't turn someone else's stomach; on Sundays try to walk like a lady and not like the slut you are so bent on becoming; don't sing benna in Sunday school; you mustn't speak to wharf–rat boys, not even to give directions; don't eat fruits on the street—flies will follow you; but I don't sing benna on Sundays at all and never in Sunday school; this is how to sew on a button; this is how to make a button–hole for the button you have just sewed on; this is how to hem a dress when you see the hem coming down and so to prevent yourself from looking like the slut I know you are so bent on becoming; this is how you iron your father's khaki shirt so that it doesn't have a crease; this is how you iron your father's khaki pants so that they don't have a crease; this is how you grow okra—far from the house, because okra tree harbors red ants; when you are growing dasheen, make sure it gets plenty of water or else it makes your throat itch when you are eating it; this is how you sweep a corner; this is how you sweep a whole house; this is how you sweep a yard; this is how you smile to someone you don't like too much; this is how you smile to someone you don't like at all; this is how you smile to someone you like completely; this is how you set a table for tea; this is how you set a table for dinner; this is how you set a table for dinner with an important guest; this is how you set a table for lunch; this is how you set a table for breakfast; this is how to behave in the presence of men who don't know you very well, and this way they won't recognize immediately the slut I have warned you against becoming; be sure to wash every day, even if it is with your own spit; don't squat down to play marbles—you are not a boy, you know; don't pick people's flowers—you might catch something; don't throw stones at blackbirds, because it might not be a blackbird at all; this is how to make a bread pudding; this is how to make doukona; this is how to make pepper pot; this is how to make a good medicine for a cold; this is how to make a good medicine to throw away a child before it even becomes a child; this is how to catch a fish; this is how to throw back a fish you don't like, and that way something bad won't fall on you; this is how to bully a man; this is how a man bullies you; this is how to love a man; and if this doesn't work there are other ways, and if they don't work don't feel too bad about giving up; this is how to spit up in the air if you feel like it, and this is how to move quick so that it doesn't fall on you; this is how to make ends meet; always squeeze bread to make sure it's fresh; but what if the baker won't let me feel the bread?; you mean to say that after all you are really going to be the kind of woman who the baker won't let near the bread?





Thursday, February 11, 2016

Reading Analysis Handout

Guidelines for Reading Analysis Presentations 1 & 2
Sign-up for one reading during Weeks 2-3 and one reading during Weeks 4-6. Make a note of the article titles and presentation dates that you sign up for below.
Reading analysis 1 article: __________________________   Presentation date: _______________
Reading analysis 2 article: __________________________   Presentation date: _______________
You will be presenting your analysis in class along with two to five of your classmates. The class will be counting on you to be on top of the article you are covering, so please be prepared!
This assignment is worth 40 points – to receive credit, you must participate in the presentation of your analysis. You will be graded primarily on your written analysis (breakdown of scoring below), but outstanding presentations will be rewarded.
Before you begin your work, examine the Evaluating Arguments handout.
Read the article you will be analyzing carefully. If possible, read it twice. On your first reading, just try to identify the main idea(s) and get a feel for the writer’s approach and the flow of the piece. On your second reading, go over the text more carefully; notice how the writer constructs his or her argument. You will probably want to mark up your text and/or take notes.
To prepare your written analysis:
Identify the author’s name and the title of the article. Answer the following questions. Put your answers in outline form (see sample analysis on the reverse side of this sheet).
1.     What is the central claim (or thesis) of the selection? Your answer should be a complete sentence in your own words. Be as specific as possible, but remember that your claim should cover the whole article. (12 points)
2.     Is the central claim expressed explicitly or implicitly? The claim is explicit if the writer spells out what it is. The claim is implicit if the writer only implies the claim but does not state it outright. (2 points)
3.     What reasons link the evidence to the claim? In other words, why does the evidence support the claim? Reasons may be presented explicitly or implied. (8 points)
4.     What evidence does the writer present to support his or her claim? Specify and categorize the evidence (e.g. examples, personal experiences, analogy, authoritative opinion, facts, statistical data, cause-effect reasoning, results of scientific experiments, comparison, interviews, etc. – see sample on back). Do not answer this question with detailed quotes or paraphrases from the article! For additional guidance, see the discussion of evidence on pp. 91-101 of your textbook Current Issues. (10 points)
5.     Comment briefly on the persuasiveness of the article by answering one or more of the following questions.  (5 points)
·       Is the argument convincing? Does it rely on emotional, ethical, and/or logical appeals?
·       Are there flaws in the reasoning of the argument? Does it rely on questionable sources?
·       Does understanding the argument require knowledge of the historical or cultural context in which it was written?
·       How do the style, organization, and/or tone contribute or detract from the persuasiveness of the argument?
·       What is your personal reaction to the article?
6.     Write two to three discussion questions to ask the class about the article. The best questions will stimulate interesting discussion about the issues raised in the article. You may also ask questions that “test” your classmates’ recall and understanding of the article. (3 points)


SAMPLE ANALYSIS of “Does Your Language Shape How You Think?” by Guy Deutscher

Central claim: While our native language may not be able to constrain what we can think, it influences how we think about and experience the world by compelling us to develop habitual patterns of thinking about and organizing our perceptions (Explicit).

Reason: Particularities of specific languages lead native speakers to develop “habits of mind,” such as specifying the time (verb tense) of an event, assigning gender to inanimate objects, differentiating shades of color, or using a particular directional orientation system. These “habits of mind” compel us to focus, organize, and differentiate our thinking and perceptions in keeping with the rules and customs of our particular native language.

Evidence:
  • Examples of differences in what various languages oblige speakers to consider, such as a person’s gender and the time of an event (past, present, future)
  • Results of experiments that show gender-related associations with inanimate objects in speakers of languages that assign gender to objects
  • Results of experiments on that suggest differences in color perception among speakers of languages that have different words for colors
  • Extended explanation of the Guugu Yimithirr language’s use of a geographical system for describing and understanding space
    • Comparison with use of our more familiar egocentric systems 
    • Related examples and narratives (stories) illustrating the resulting differences on thinking (perceiving and experiencing the world), such as the storyteller who made geographically accurate hand gestures whenever he told the same story and the hypothetical example comparing geographical and egocentric perception of the “mirrored” hotel rooms.
  • Description of the Matses language’s obligation that speakers specify how a piece of information is known (directly experienced vs. inferred vs. conjectured)

Comment: The argument is very convincing because of its strong logical appeals. Each point is carefully explained and supported with logical reasoning and relevant evidence. The author avoids making broad claims and overstating his argument, which enhances the article’s ethical appeal. Personally, I agree with the conclusions of the article. When I have spoken other languages, I often felt I had to think differently, which sometimes felt difficult and unnatural. For example, when speaking French, I found it hard to remember the genders of objects; it made no sense to me that a shoe should be feminine and a hat should be masculine.

Discussion questions: What does the article suggest about the possibility (or probability) of misunderstandings between people with different native languages? Which habits of mind might encourage better (or worse) critical thinking? What did the article suggest about perception of color?